All Comments on 'Cherished'

Five.

exudes honesty

it feels absolutely true to itself, is unapologetic and doesn't leave a reader feeling uncomfortable having read it. i think your write absolutely engages with the reader, and that's not always easy with this sort of material - so many shut the reader out, where this addresses them directly.

and cherished it's emotional honesty. I would query the punctuation though--it felt like there should be a semi-colon after line 2 and then no full stop after line 7, to let the thoughts flow on. x

I loved this. It speaks to me. Don't change a word.

Go UnderYourSpell! This blew me away and is getting a recommend. You are being very emotionally honest here.

I only found one bug. That 'and' in line 11. Drop it and see how much tighter it is.

expression about appreciating the now of love. When one can relate poetry to one's station in life--meaning lights in brilliance. This is a shining star.