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A real pleasure to read this morning. S.O.

M, the first three stanza's are just a transmission of your feeling, never write from the heart, about it yes. Avoid this, some of it is almost platitudinous, and the first S cliched, I fell comfortable saying this to you because, you are a very powerful writer. And everyone makes mistakes.

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The last two stanzas are ripping good. It helps me to remember William Carlos Williams 'things not ideas' and that in poetry emotions are arrived at through things.

I enjoyed this poem. It is enough to incite inspiration.

However, we must not forget that being lonely is part of life, and not only restricted to social and/or romantic relationships. We are born with the ability to express it in some form or another during infancy, adolescence and adulthood, and pass it on even at one’s death.

Sincerely,

Jes_da_man