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Reflective with layers of meaning
I haven't read much poetry on this subject though I know there must be a lot of it out there. But your poems about it are a wonderful balance of restraint and overwhelming. Easy five.
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2nd visual of the day, I don't like this visual. Poem 200! I feel you pushed it right to the edge.
Hiroshima.....
......memories, dark times indeed. Such unimaginable horror conjured in so few words.
Tess
Burns
when read. I feel this image.
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Goodness that's a powerful write in so few words!
the understatement of this
makes its impact powerful. a big 'small' poem.
Great Tanka.
You hit it perfectly with a very disturbing image. Getting a recommend.
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