All Comments on 'Stella and Irene'

Not this:

"hurt by a world with it's taunts,"

But this:

hurt by a world with its taunts,

Wrote a 'poem' about it. :)

Okay, I'll stop. Five.

beautiful, Annie. In more than one way. It has a couple of spots, like the it's, and maybe lose a comma,( because lots of times a line break is a pause in itself) but it is one of your best. A lovely read this morning.

~ maria

it's true

100 but w/o further coment

for stating truth. Love is love.

I say no more, but feel like ripping bigot's throats from their bodies.

and true.

(Shall we both enrol in Theo's Poetry 101? I think we need it x)

This a deeply affecting piece of poetry. Well done.

the sweetness balanced by the sadness it also calls to mind, but these lines cannot help but make a person smile with their warmth:

their sunshine lights a room

and teaches me to cook

some special magic.

I get so angry when I hear about good people suffering like this. And this is a sign you have written something excellent. Getting a recommend.

thank you again and again and again and again. I cry over this. I relate. It burns. You get it.

......don't need my comment - just know I read it, enjoyed it and voted.

Tess