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Adam and Eve

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by twelveoone02/17/11

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End it here!
I have no doubt.
100, you don't need to tell us the last three lines.

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by tigerjen02/20/11

This poem has potential for a 'sequel', to continue the story of Adam & Eve, such as after he 'eats' the apple...... ;)

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by softsmile04/08/11

wonderfully succinct!!

I love this! And I agree, "I have no doubt" would make for a perfect ending. I also adore the way "not" and "doubt" are near rhymes. :)

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