Hidden Theater Steam

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you are good - and quintessence trembles - believe or not, this is a Shakespeare trick - anglo-saxon to latinate.
Popcorn rockets in the dark.
Coffee almost escaped from mine-100!, very glad to have met you.

Deliciously sexy! ;)

Titillating, fun and clever. I like the juxtaposition of the two lines about "ripples of response" and "nipples rise."

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very clever and sexy to the last bite :)

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Hmmm. Not sure about this one. It's well written but I didn't hit it for me but this might be me.

better than good

I want to leave a comment, well, one better than this, but for now, just wanted to let you know I loved it. excellent work:)

~~ maria