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by Anonymous

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by vrosej1002/18/11

Creepy.

But good. You seem to be sporting the same dark spot as me.

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by twelveoone02/18/11

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I would leave a comment, but I'm afraid I would digress from the poem.
So I'll leave with the ever ambiguous "hits", and the home of 100!

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by butters02/18/11

you build the momentum, friday

in your own inimitable style. love how this shows where the drive comes from behind so many of those who push themselves on to excel, excel, excel...

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by Maria239402/23/11

I voted

the first time I read this, and the star is still stuck at 5 or I would give you another 5;)

I love how you have no fear of being honest about your emotions, whether they are from your childhood or present day, You are a rare man that will even admit to feeling and your poetry is all that much better for your honesty.This one brings back memories of being bullied, both as a teenager and as an adult. Mean people never stop being mean, it seems.

Keep up the good work!

~ m

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