All Comments on 'Advice to a Young Ink Pen'

Considering the title, the first line wins right away

Aim to make your mark on life

the rest of it

pretty good

pretty damn good

100!

The perspective makes it intriguing--advice to a pen. No nonsense and without overused words. Just a good poem, UYS.

A wonderful poem! I read it over many times. I see hints of an underlying different meaning but I could be wrong. Whatever, it flows beautifully! Very well constructed! I liked it!

is sweet as a nut, annie :D

its humour and innuendo made me smile, and your clever use of the form doesn't detract or distract but lends it bones.

enjoyed it, to the last scratch

at the clever use of rhyme in this poem. The whole this is terrific and I might have given it an E if I had been the editor. I may be ( part of) a minority , but I love poems about writing.

~ maria