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Yes, you put a lot into this second chapter and you did it all in one page. I like the fact that you gave us some background on Ayden and his family. And May's fear of rejection, it will be interesting to see where that stems from. Is that the blank spot in her memory? What will happen when Liz and Mark arrive from New York? And since Ayden can read her mind, why hasn't he felt her insecurity and told her of how he feels and that yes he is her "boyfriend"? And of course the voices, who and what are they? Yes you put a lot into this chapter including the mysteries that will keep me waiting for chapter 3.
I am really liking this
Please continue it - I have added you to my favorites to check regularly. thanks
I am so in love with this!!
I think you are doing a great job on this. I can't wait to see where you are going with this. The only thing that's going to be a problem is the waiting!! Lol I don't think I can handle it. guess I'll just keep re-reading what you already have. (:
Thanks for this awesome series you are creating.
-addicted
Cool!!
He is the vampire, but what is she? More to read.....lol
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