and let this one percolate. For some reason it didn't strike me at first, but then I realized I wasn't catching meaning. Maybe reading the title would have been a good idea (roll eyes espie). As simple verse with simple meaning, good--not brides and horses (LOL), but good.
This stays with you after reading. Nicely done.
Mary Poppins died? Law of unintended consequences. 100
I like the visuals you give. The title itself is poetic.
is pure gold, V. wonderful expression
clinging to cling, possibly...
was this another dream-inspired write, v?
that manages to be weighty and weightless at once. You could wring meaning from a stone! And once again the title puts the whole poem in perspective. A fine five of a poem, Vee. :-)
love this and am tempted to say hang on in there but I won't! love the visual of the ghostly you hanging onto a chimney pot!
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