All Comments on 'by moonlight in the afterlife'

by vrosej10

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Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoabout 13 years ago
I had to read everything else

and let this one percolate. For some reason it didn't strike me at first, but then I realized I wasn't catching meaning. Maybe reading the title would have been a good idea (roll eyes espie). As simple verse with simple meaning, good--not brides and horses (LOL), but good.

sandybsandybabout 13 years ago

This stays with you after reading. Nicely done.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
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Mary Poppins died? Law of unintended consequences. 100

Maria2394Maria2394about 13 years ago
beautiful

I like the visuals you give. The title itself is poetic.

buttersbuttersabout 13 years ago
that last line

is pure gold, V. wonderful expression

clinging to cling, possibly...

was this another dream-inspired write, v?

AngelineAngelineabout 13 years ago
A wraith of a poem

that manages to be weighty and weightless at once. You could wring meaning from a stone! And once again the title puts the whole poem in perspective. A fine five of a poem, Vee. :-)

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 13 years ago
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love this and am tempted to say hang on in there but I won't! love the visual of the ghostly you hanging onto a chimney pot!

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