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Kinda
sexy in a strange way to wittle ole me because of those first surges this piece springs to thought--ya know, surfing the net lookin at women scantily clad while my hand touches wetness in my middle in a WTF moment. And that first kiss, that is the kiss from a girl--what it did as our hands fumbled on all of these places and we writhed against each other not knowing what and how. OMG friday--damn you...I'm frisky now! Look what just happened with this piece to queer little me, a passionate trip down memory lane--and now I am gonna have sex! Isn't everybody just ecstatic?
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Is this that prose poetry I hear about, couldn't you have rhymed groins with loins or playground with fist pound or sumptin', so I don't have to go another round with....
Not bad, doesn't kick ass, as your stuff usually does. For what that's worth - 100
I don't know
exactly what to say except this rings true in a shy sort of way. I still don't think about my kids' sex lives and they are grown. I guess that is the appropriate thing....
direct, non-apologetic
i like this, its honesty. i think it does kick arse, but in a more subtle fashion than normal arse-kickings.
I Love this!
Frank and emotionally honest dealing with a subject most people would prefer to ignore. Bravo, this is the kind of poetry I can get behind. Five and a recommend.
Simple and profound
Five.
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