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Downer!!!!
Bob when you went past Chapter 2 I knew it was a down hill ending coming. Thank for the read any way looking forward to your next one.
A bit of a bummer for an ending
He was a man up until the last and then wimped out. bummer!!!!!!!
I didn't think it could get worse
I was wrong, this chapter represents a new low. I guess I'm reading this for the laugh factor -- otherwise, there is no point. Pretty well-written, technically. Just that the plot keeps going downhill.
Oh, one other thing. Maybe women can have multiples, and can just lie back and continue to go at it (until they get sore), but most men have by far the stronger sex drive and usually want to fuck more days in a row than most women. Remember, it only takes one rooster to satisfy all those hens.
Was this the ending?
Well, I still don't like the people in the story, that being they are of low moral character to say the least. But it was interesting and you write well enough that I finished it.
You sort of left us hanging with the ending and there is at least another chapter, not that there has to be one. Heck, why not take up with Allison and see how Sarah really likes it?
Great Story
JPB, the ending was perfect and, for those who doubt it, more potentially realistic than most people would believe.
He'll never recover from Allisons' original cheating, Gloria would never get another shot and Momma is a horny husbands wet dream come true.
Handling Sarah, masterful, beautifully done - great ending!!!
Thank you for the really good entertainment!!!
Short and sweet
Sarah has balls and Frank thinks with his dick. Sarah wins and no one looses. Sometimes quickies are okay.
Good Entertainment
Gee JPB, you had to go and wimp out Frank on the last page...... When
he said he was going to give the picture with Larry and John, I started screaming, "Give her only the new ones!" But he didn't pay any attention!
Thanks for this short novel....
Baby
He needs to reverse his vesectomy and knock one of them up. It would be good if Sarah were to have her sterilization reversed so there were grandbabies.
awful
really.
One of JPB's very best
But... I agree with Bruce22: You super wimped out Frank at the very end. Rats! If life is all about rubbing your dick in a vagina, then Frank is good to go. However, man is made to seek variety, and eventually frank will feel totally free to rub his dick in some one else's vagina -- especially as Vangie succumbs to the reality of aging. And Frank may find that no matter how good Sarah is in bed, there are better out there; a man's dick doesn't shrink with age, but a woman's vagina gets looser.
And it ain't just the 10 inch dick that Sarah seeks. There are 10 inch vibrators she could have Frank exercise her with if that was all it was; no, she wants to be with those particular men who have the dicks she so loves. Call it what you will, but she loves her three fuck buddies, and that will eventually dawn on Frank for whom Sarah's affection is, and always has been, secondary to her love for her fuck buddies and herself. By her own actions and her own words, she would give him up for them, but she would not give them up for him. Accepting that, he is a dominated super wimp.
And the losers continue to circle the drain
Nuke them all and let God figure them out! Great writing JPB love your stories. This one is not so good but you have brilliantly stripped them of all semblance of humanity Again, very well done!
darn.
good story pitty about the wimpy ending. showed so much promise and then... pus swiped at the end. but at lest he'll be one happy odd ball.
I Like
I think it was a Great Story overall and Cant wait to see if JPB
comes up with something New like this I like the longer storyline.
and I dont think he "wimped out".
Frank that is.
Is that it???
This can't be the end of this...can it? There was no ending, it just stopped. Are you thinking of doing a sequel or a "book 2" sort of thing? I was really into this story and enjoyed your writing style but I'll feel hosed if there's no more.
Technically good written, but an awful plot
Given his prior actions, it is not believable that Frank gives Sarah her will. Also not believable is the enormous lot of extreme sluts in this story. But that's JPB...
liked the story and the ending ....almost
I liked the idea of having additional lovers for him , but sarah made a mistake he did not catch on to. When she said she would keep him so satisfied and between her mother and her there would be nothing left,
What he missed on picking up on was that since she picked her days for additional lovers and he was with her mother on those days, he was entitled to pick his three days for his other lover , and i would have picked tuesday friday and saturday to fuck allison, now can she keep him fully satisfied on her allowed sunday to prevent his being with allison or whoever on his three days,.... I think not.
keep going
ive read alot of stories in this catigory and i find most of them are a repeat of each other but urs is different please keep going.
Worthless bitch---------------------
File for divorce, out Russ, kiss Vangie's user ass good bye and take the money and run. Every woman he knows is a worthless slut. Then castrate himself and use the money he gets to buy an adult bookstore and spend the rest of his life paying homage at a glory hole. Thats all he is good for.
Nice ending.
I want to be Frankie. Size does matter huh?
They Don't Get It
Too many Anons' believe he wimped out...Nope!
His basic, loyal and respectful nature was crushed by Allison in the very beginning. Next he is constantly engaged with hot, slutty women who occupy his time...he is available so...
Finally, he has Momma who is the closest thing to love and adoration he has. He knows where he stands with her, no lies or sneaking and she is safe, hot and wants only him. Her deal...marry my slut daughter, you care for her, not the same care as momma but - it works!
So, nothing else going on, life is good, no sweet, honest little damsels catching his attention, the love he craved more than anything was destroyed by his intended so why sit home with his five fingers? If something or someone comes along at a later date that gives him that original teenage feeling he felt with Allison then, he would have to address it then - maybe never, that would be a whole new story!
Did he wimp out, is he an asshole - I don't think so. He's playing the cards that were dealt to him and they happen to be sensational - deep love, emotion and romance - nope...well, maybe momma? He likes having someone at home - life is good, no heartaches!
Thanks again JPB, Frank is a man - no wuss.
I kept hoping , but...
...no one ended up likable.
Shit! If I wanted to read about the actions of assholes, I'd turn on NBC and watch the interviews with Charlie Sheen!
Allison was the only redeeming one in the story, but then she fell! No one left was worth the time or effort.
A remarkable story!
For all the bitching about JPB, I think we really underrate him as a storyteller.
This was a marvelous story--rich and complicated and detailed and full of (sometimes comical) twists and turns. It wasn't terribly realistic (uh, ya think???) and it wasn't deeply emotional, but for what it was I think it was fantastic.
Kudos and thanks to JPB! And keep 'em coming!
ohio
Shit--Big cocks; 10 inch cocks. What nonsense
An excited vagina is only 4 so a 4 in dick will fill it. However, a vaginia will stretch to accomdate up to 8 inches but not 10 inches.
Basically once in, a woman can't tell a 4 inch cock from an 8 in cock. Women can tell the difference in thickness. I gave it 1 star.
Frank's life so far..................................?
Please, Sir, can we have some more?
So much left to be shared. Are you willing to go the distance?
How many JPBs are there?
I'm reading Loving Wives in alphabetic order and a high proportion of them are by JPB.
They vary wildly in style and content, though the writing quality is consistently good.
Some are brilliant, some are pathetic.
I think JPB is an editor to a team of people, and that they are playing a joke on we readers.
WOW!!!!!
Just read this again, 1 through 7, superb story and humorous to boot. I am convinced that 85% of the members and anon's need to take a course in reading comprehension. Sometimes I have to go back and re-read the story because I missed what they are commenting about. I can't find it, don't know where they got the idea from, but I do wish they would write a story about their comment.
Thank you again J P B, for another great story.
Enjoyable
Sometimes I laughed, others I groaned over the characters' boneheaded actions, but I was entertained all the way.
A SLUT, A CUCK, 2 CHEATERS, SEVERAL ADULTERERS
looks like a match made in purgatory, TK U MLJ LV NV
Amazing
series. I loved all the characters and the way they have worked things out among themselves. The only thing that spoiled it for me was that Frank had a vasectomy. I would have loved to see Vangie get pregnant and how all of them covered themselves.
Why not......?
Sarah isn't asking for much. All she wants to do is fuck three different guys (including her father) three days a week. Why not just threaten to have Sarah and Russ exposed for incest? Why not just dump the whole fucked up family?
A CUT ABOVE
I don't much care for your usual bleeding heart stories but this one had me laughing all the way through it. But it don't take much to keep me amused.
That's an ending?
This is a giant pile of cheaters and whores and I enjoyed the whole story right up until the ending, when it didn't END! Nothing was decided. Is he letting her keep all three? Is he going after Allison? (Just give less days to Sarah). When does he decide to just sell his place, take the money and run? Might have more peace in his life away from all these women! Yes dear my ass.
wtf
So I just read this thing beginning to end and I'm still not sure what I just read.... all I can really do is think WTF was this.
Was this in the end JPB's lets see how many fucked up characters I can put together in one story, make em all villans and see what people say???
OK so as it stands, very well written and entertaining, I'm not really sure what to think of it since everyone was well.. fucked in the head in some way or another.. but in the beginning of the story I had to keep reading going "I know this fuckhead cant get his way out of this one lets see how he fucks up next"...
In the end everyone in this story deserves each other and whatever shitstorm rains down on them at any time.... still well written and kept me reading and entertained so 5/5 for the series... thx for the read but I'm not sure if I should really be wondering if this was a good story or if I should be pissed that's a nice chunk of time in my life I cant get back lol.. only a few authors here can do that to me and this is one of em...
Thank You, Bob
I read all your stories and this is the best! It even taught me a few life lessons: Go with the flow, keep your emotions in check and don't sweat the small stuff. Well written, always interesting, excellent plot. God I wish I was Frank. Wish I could write like JPB too, but that ain't gonna happen. 5 Stars!
I mean he is just SO fucked...
I mean he can't keep his dick in his pants and he can't be faithful and yet he feels justified in being upset just because both of his wives got pregnant by some other guy.
Lying and cheating and how can we really be expected to like ANY of these people...?
I guess we're supposed to be ok about the story without liking any of the characters... and though the story is well-written hating everyone does detract from my enjoyment.
SO she admits she's a cheating slut
And he knows it. Which means he's going after Allison with the short term goal of getting rid of Sarah and her Mother. Sarah just doesn't know she's toast. But she began to get an understanding when, instead of fucking her, he threw her out of bed and told her to use the guest room. She understood that was the beginning of the end for her. Another non-ending by the master of the unfinished - JPB.
Crap!
Sluts and Cuck perverted bullshit!
**
Ending made little sense and flipped Frank's personality.
Nope.
Not the usual cheating wife story
Since just about EVERY character in this story is a cheater (there's no indication that Frank's and Allison's parents are cheating on each other), there's no "good guy" to root for against the evil cheaters. So it's more like going to the track and betting which horse will make it across the finish line first. Whoever ends up with the most on the side wins.
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