by bellefleure
That was phenomenal, well put together, the way you were able to easily transition from the characters thoughts to live action was smooth. And the whole story was hot, hot, hot.
Reciprocal Affection is a tender and passionate love story, well-conceived and well-written. However, it is too short in all aspects, from introduction to character development to love scene. Accordingly, it needs a sequel.
Amazing story. So beautifully paced and descriptive. Thanks Hard as a rock after reading. 🙃
Good premise.
But too artsy-fartsy for my taste.
It seems as if everything sexual is referred to in a way that's not really erotic. Not to me anyway.
Three stars.
Superbly crafted. Extremely well written. I don’t think I tripped once over your phraseology. The result? This story kept me engaged and enthralled from beginning to end. Thanks for sharing your many talents. I found each scene very hot. Easily 5 stars v