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by theognis02/25/11

*****

It's easy to dislike this poem, and to pick away at it, but I think there are too many instances of undeniable excellence contained within the piece for them to go unrewarded.

Five.

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by twelveoone02/25/11

*

a bit of violent ice porn, but not enough to overcome cliches.
4

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by tigerjen02/25/11

Very well done!

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