Make It Up To You

Real

Very real, tender, warm and loving. Based upon personal experience?

Wonderful

Wow! lovely way to make up for past transgressions. To have one's love finally returned with such passion could only be so sweet.

Please keep writing. Great work

Real?

I'll never tell...

Warm

As other people have said, this is very warm and real between the two, and you've got a good grasp on reality here and Brooke's intentional way of driving off the friend who cares and is always there. Amazing sense of humor, too. 'I have dark hair. Care to guess my eye color?' XD Great read, please make more like these, the romance is an awesome leveling balance to the lovin'. =3

Oh yeah

This was a real experience. Very nicely written, and I love - I have dark hair and care to guess my eye color.

I've just stumbled across this story, and it was really good. I think a sequel would be interesting.

Pig tails and puppy dog tails - well almost

Like the little boy who pulls the little girl's "pig tails" because he really likes her. This on-going tension between to best friends was nothing more than love and sexual tension. The make-up sex was good but I'm sure if one was on the receiving end, it was spectacular. The story was a good read.