All Comments on 'Approval Through Denial'

nice twist, but otherwise too straight though

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I liked this, saw the situation, knew the characters. A good short novel compressed into a few lines. Lovely.

that is so sad but I do find the second stanza to be more prose than the first

First stanza was the best part for me.....second stanza I felt didn't really fit with the first stanza......

.......these "slice of life" poems so well. Lovely images.

Tess