Holy Shit Ch. 03

I liked the original best

Sorry you lost me again

I've only read two of your stories Burn Baby Burn an absolutely hall of fame story 5 stars all the way only to be fucked up by the ending and now this one. So much for Beckys undying love for her brother, I'll never let another man fuck me , touch me or whatever. Why in the hell did you ruin it all by bring in their father. For the life of me I can't see your logic. Mum said he's fucking hopeless in bed and Mandy carries on if he's the best fuck she's ever had at the end. I didn't waste my time reading your rewrite. You've shown everyone that you have the ability to write and do it well but your endings are so bloody frustrating....sorry 2 stars for both stories.......