All Comments on 'The Terror of The Inferno'

The storyline seems to be rather entertaining.

The writing needs work, a lot of work. Look into grammar, punctuation, homonyms, near-homonyms, and simple editing.

And then, there's the minor detail about a story unfinished and no indication that there might be more to follow.

I would not mind seeing more of the ladventures of this d-merc with liquid green eyes