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What curse...This Winter

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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone02/24/11

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Mike, back off a second, start with the first three lines, seem like you've heard them before? Go from there.

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by Koba02/24/11

I've been hearing that it has been a rough winter. Been rather mild up here in Alaska.

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by fridayam02/24/11

I thought you should

take the idea of the first three lines and develop it more. In V2 suddenly Winter isn't desperate any more, do you see?

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