I am big fan of the short, sweet, and hot stories. Good job.
Well Done..........just a bit more color on your canvas.........write write write...........
Great story. I have to agree with the other comment about it could use a little more detail, but overall great work. will definitely read more of your work.
:)
you gotta read shoguy for tips on how to write dude
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I am big fan of the short, sweet, and hot stories. Good job.
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Well Done..........just a bit more color on your canvas.........write write write...........
You've got some great work
Great story. I have to agree with the other comment about it could use a little more detail, but overall great work. will definitely read more of your work.
:)
start reading shoguy for tips
you gotta read shoguy for tips on how to write dude
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