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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/05/15

Considering it it ended, I guess it was the husband's turn to become brain dead around Monica.

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by Anonymous12/22/15

Hmmm

If Monica left with a guy how does she watch out for her or would stop her?

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by sbrooks103x04/28/16

Re-Reading

Monica: "I know what went on. Nothing!" - Of course she conveniently forgets all the other times she fucked up his and Audrey's relationship!

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by sbrooks103x04/28/16

Dancing

I mentioned this on another similar story:

I'm not Catholic, but I grew up in a Catholic neighborhood, and I recall that at the Catholic school dances the couples were always reminded to "leave room for the Holy Ghost", i.e. not get too close. Married women who are not dancing with their husbands should follow that rule!

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by luedon04/28/16

Dear Sbrooks103x re: Dancing

I thought the Trinity sequence was Son, Father and Holy Ghost.

You seem to be suggesting a Trinity of Wife, Holy Ghost and Some Bloke Who Isn't Her Husband.

L

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by Tw0Cr0ws12/09/16

piss on his back and tell him it's raining

Monica never said anything to attempt to get them back together in any high school hallway.
Monica has been lying to him at least since senior year of college.
Female best friend for 15 years does not know that her female best friend is serious about a man?
Pull the other one.
He is sucker enough to keep falling for it.
For reasons unknown to him Monica has never liked him and is working to break them up as she has been since their first date.

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by Anonymous02/10/17

hasn't kept up over time

i used to really dig JPB's work in general and this story in particular. not so much anymore. now the protagonist just comes across as weak.

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