Last Lust

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Good read. Typo in the first line of the second stanza. it happens. I am the fricken queen of em.

Well done!

I'm ignoring the typo

because this is so personal and real. It has a very authentic feel to it and the directly sexual language (as compared to the implied stuff) is applied so judiciously that when you do use it, it's like a shock for the reader. Great intimacy in this poem and one of your best of the new batch, imo.

Damnation!

That's a glaring typo! It'll teach me not to rush to print. Thanks for commenting any way all of you.

Tess, blushing.

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It suddenly got very hot in here phewwwww !

Typo be damned

I adored this! What a welter of erotic, fizzing words--like lit fuses. x

You paint a vivid picture

a little abrupt, a littel sad and very very real.

Painting a picture is what words are supposed to do... nicely done.

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this is very well done, even
the Tiffany lamps, the nipple clamps,
which would send me to the floor laughing, just brought a wry sedate smile instead.
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