Finding Love

WOW!!!

soon please!

Love it!!!

Omg I love it!! Please don't make me wait to read the next one!

hmmm

a hellion warrior, one who is feared. i do hope ivy calms him( some) hope to see more soon

AWESOME!
5 stars. great story. I really loved the twist in the end that it's the Wolfland pack. But hell, shouldn't she have run to him? Anything would be better than Zan and her father. I hope he can get her mom out of that home too. You did a great job of making Dolmas a horrific person/wolf. Can't wait for more.

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Where did you pull this fantastic story from because make sure you go back and get us more!!!! This Daylon character has to be one of the most sexy alpha males. Defiantly need lots more of him soon.

Wow!!!

You hooked me from the first moment i started reading and i just so love Daylon and please don't change him one lil bit!! i can't wait to read more!!!

Donna

well now ...

this is just a fabulous start. can hardly wait to read more!

Absolutely rivetting!

Wow this story pulled me in straight from the start, please keep up the great work, can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow

Wonderful writing, entrapped me right from the start. Please keep this going!!

WOW!!

That is a very explosive beginning.... can't wait to read the next chapter!

Wow

Great first chapter can't wait for more.

Awesome Beginning!!!

This was a very exciting and sexy first chapter! I'm hooked! Looking forward to the next! Hope you're a fast writer lol.

Excellent

MORE!!! Good start.

Awesome

Great beginning please please continue

Please continue

Great beginning...definitely want to read more.

incredible beginning

nice start to a great story....continue on writing. want to read more

more!!!!!

Wow!!

Hate to be demanding but please update as soon as possible. This is delicious!
K.

MORE

I loved this...please continue and update soon

Damn

That was the best start to a were story I have seen on here yet. Please Please update as soon as possible and keep it coming.

Beautiful!

It's not often that a new author and story on Literotica is such a beautiful piece of work!

Keep it up because it's absolutely stunning to see!

You NEED to continue..

I'm dying in anticipation!!

Awesome!!

I was shocked to see you did not have any other submitted stories - your work is fantastic, well-written and hot! Please post another chapter soon!! You are definitely one of my favorite authors!

NOW

UPDATE NOW! Am sorry for being so abrasive but this is very good and I would appreciate it if you were to update as soon as possible, thank you.

as soon as possible= NOW!

much love

Thank you so much!!

Man... I have been blown away by the response! Thank you for the comments/emails! Being new and unknown I figured this wouldn't gather much attention.

I made a newbie mistake and didn't put this as chapter 1. I *am* working on chapter 2. My editor turned this story around fast, so I hope he'll be able to do the same for chapter 2. Thanks everyone for such a warm welcome :) and making my "first time" painless LOL.

~Dura Blue

Great start!

Really well drawn characters; can't wait to see what happens.

More please!!!

I couldn't stop reading this!! Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter!

Well Done

Oh man I was sucked into this story right off the bat. You do a great job painting a picture with words. I know you said you're a newbie at this site, but how long have you been writing though? I can't wait to see what happens next. I always loved these kinds of scenarios! Hehe. I am curious though who Ivy's real father is though.

wow

loved this story!! great work!

Hmmmmm!

Im gonna whup your ass so hard you will not be able to sit down for a month of Sundays if you dont bring out chapter 2 fast and the chapter had better be loooooooong and better than this oNE!!!!!!!!!
No pressure though!LOL!

More, more, more!! you had me on the edge of my seat the whole time, please bring us Chapter 2 really soon :-D

Powerful!!

Deam! This was explosive! You got me on the edge of my chair, this is one of the most exiting stories I have read. Looking forward to the next chapter.......

more

Please write a second part and quickly

Outstanding

Fricking Fabulous Is All I Wanna Say ! ! !

Incredible, Marvelous

I can't wait for more. I can see this story going far. If you keep it up you may end up with a perfect 5 stars with every new chapter. Marvelously conceived and I love the setting.

Oh Yeah!

Hangin' for the next chapter! Got the goods for a great story. Well done.

omg. I love this story. Waiting on the next chapter.

LOVED IT!!!!

I loved it so much caint wait till the next chapter. Please don't keep us waiting so long!!!!!!! Keep up the good work.

Delish!

NOM NOM NOM (that means yum...) ...MORE MORE MORE...

this was a damn fine read! welcome to the club =)

was great story

i really enjoyed this i hope first chapter and would love to see more please

Love it!!

I can't wait to see more!!

GREAT

Just a great read!!
Please continue!

Fan-fuckin-tastic!

Okay I'm late to the party (story of my life these days LOL) but I finally got a bit of spare reading time :-)

Stunning opening chapter! The characters are so vibrant, the creation of the world spot on, and a male lead to make a woman drool. Quite spectacular.

That spells one thing...Talent! You have it dripping from your fingertips in spades and you have me hook, line and sinker!

Brilliant chapter! So looking forward to reading more and as soon as possible.

Jaz

Awesome

This is a great story. I'm really looking forward to reading more!

OMG!!!!

You left it at such a huge cliff hanger!! I can't stand it!!! I love the story. The characters are well developed. I want to kill Dolmas & Zan myself!! I can't wait to read more!!! Great job!!!

I"m begging you!

Please finish it!! This is such an amazing start and I don't want the story to end!!

Ooh!

I like it.

amazing! please write on!

i hate you if u dont finish

please i'm crying finish this story, DAMN, IT WAS SO GOOD N NOT LIKE SOME OF THESE WANNA BE'S i mean REALLY GOOD, PLZ FINISH