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Smiling Down On Me

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by Anonymous

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by tigerjen02/26/11

A bit long but very well done! :)

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by fridayam02/26/11

Make this much shorter

and eschew the cliche and you would have a poem worth reading and writing. We all know what is involved in sex so you don't have to spell it out--cut down to the nub of it. I enjoyed your sincerity:)

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by vrosej1002/28/11

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Friday is right.

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