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Your refering to lit aren't you? And you are angry...
this...
is suddenly sharp. it's good-sharp. and as a reader i am well able to buy into the whole playground concept.
Of the two.....
....you submitted today this is my favourite. Some childish things never get put away.
Tess
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You and I must be on the same wave length I've just posted in a thread telling the boys to go and fight in their own playground!
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I really liked this one but for some reason while reading it the first time rather hastily, missread the last two lines as 'Whispers behind Chinese walls and Chinese burns'
Ha!
I am new here but have to say, I have scanned the posts in the forum and am dismayed at the way the so called moderators behave. One in particular. An egotistical C*** who it seems is in it for friends and has little concept of what good poetry is as her own poetry is unbelievably bad.
I have enjoyed your poetry. I have left comments in the past as anonymous because I did not have a membership which I have now acquired. You are one of the best poets posting.
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