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Shy Auditor Shows Her Assets Ch. 06

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by Anonymous

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by Erotonaut03/06/11

Awakening

I for one look forward to her future adventures.

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by Anonymous03/06/11

Finally admitting Ann's sexuality, allowing for pleasurable interludes!

Work without sex-play was boring! -Ann needed a throbbing penis to play with, when contemplating addictive lifestyles like group sex-DP or BDSM activities, most readily available whilst relaxing without social inhibitions. Suggesting a mixed naked office environment for Ch. 7?

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by Anonymous03/06/11

Bravo

Nicely done. I enjoyed it.

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by obscured03/06/11

Great story. Well done. Good use of the long form to build excitement. Good details and a great payoff. Congrats!

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by Barbara03/06/11

Ann's intimate [previously hidden] desires emerge, finally!

Keeping stories real, nobody sheds moral inhibition, without expectation of their orgasmic rewards!
Having observed naked carnal activities, perhaps Ann can concede desire for public exposure, during leisure times? EG:Experiencing DP/group sexual encounters should enhance her professional standing, allowing pleasure in conceding sexual inhibitions, in return for simultanious male penetrations. Overcoming lesbian tenancies, experimental sexual freedom might liberate her fullest hetrosexual participations, in future multi-orgasmic activities.

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by Anonymous03/07/11

Wonderful

So erotic. The buildup to the event(s) is a huge turn-on. It's good to see Ann lose her inhibitions.
I'm looking forward to her further adventures at Silver Pines and elsewhere.

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by Anonymous03/08/11

Can'tr wait for the next page this is a good storie.

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by LuckyBastard1303/08/11

Encore, ENCORE!

Another wonderful chapter to an amazing story. Well written and highly erotic and VERY believable.

As always, thanks for sharing.

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by Pirette03/09/11

Very Erotic

This was one of the most erotic, and hot, stories I've read on Literotica. I hope there's more to come, so to speak, soon. If not for Ann, then for other characters!

KEEP WRITING, YOU ROCK


Pirette

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by Anonymous03/14/11

More! More!

Please keep working as you have a great beginning & I'm curious where you will take it.

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by abc10109/22/11

really great story

please write more

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by Anonymous04/02/12

Where is this camp?

I just want to shave my pussy, landing-strip or bald I don't care, and go and find Jeb, Mag, Tam and hopefully Ann as well, and start enjoying life au naturel. This story is awesome!

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by Anonymous07/29/12

Jeb;s big cock.

I would have loved it if Jeb would have fucked me in the ass while Tam was licking my hot, wet pussy! mmmmmmmmmmm. thanks for a wonderful love story. lacyracheau@yahoo.com

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by mammoet11/30/12

more please

a wonderful story keep writing

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by Anonymous11/30/12

good story add more ch. two keep it going

good story but keep it going

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by ProfDavros05/02/14

A tender initiation into a bigger world

Orie, such a tender and wonderful story of opening to the possibilities. You are a skilled storyteller, capturing the enjoyment of first nudist experience to the thrill of mixed sport and polyamorous relating.

Looking forward to more of your work.

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by stevieraygovan05/08/14

Wonderful story.

I may be a bit biased, since this reminds me so much of my "Summer Voodoo" chapter and Christina's sexual awakening, but this is probably my favorite of yours so far. Between this one and "A Star Is Born—Naked," it's a tough call.

Excellent writing, sir.

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by ScattySue06/06/14

Outstanding

I've loved each of the stories in the series and would love to see you continue them.

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by arrowglass01/10/15

Very sensual and erotic tale!

Enjoyed the slow build up...the passion...the thaw...the eventual willingness to explore! Thanks for this one!

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by Anonymous03/08/15

beautiful story. thank you.

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by Anonymous03/30/15

A disappointing finish to a great start.

This promised to be another well plotted tale, this time on the ENF theme. The first chapters were erotic, though too rushed to believe she would get over her inhibition in so short a time. The ending descended into boring porno movie choreography, which is not what we expect from you. On the positive side, good plotting and dialog but no character development to speak of. Great that you featured tall strong women rather than the worrying 5'/150cm child women that so many other writers seem to like.

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by Rapier87505/29/16

This is very good - but why did you not finish it ?

Although it has been a few years since you wrote chapter 6, you could easily pick this up and continue it for the rest of their stay - and more if Ann goes back. Maybe even with Carey ?
If you do read this, please think about it - it has been a great story so far, but there is more to come still if only you would write it.

Please think about it - thanks !

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by SweetKing12609/08/16

I agree !!

I know it has been a few years, but like Rapier said, it is an awesome story and I can see many more chapters !!

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by bike4two12/18/16

I agree with the previous posters. It would be great to see a continuation. Great story !

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