homeMind ControlColorsPublic Comments

All Comments  for

Colors

by66stingray©
All
Comments (2)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous03/02/11

Good Work

Clever and just the right amount of tension. Leaving us hanging the way you did was erotic. Good first effort, and next time, try for a little more character development. And why can't someone write off their bar bill?

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by reader01810/28/11

please add more

this is a good start for a two or three part story series!
would love to read more of this story!!!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Colors  or
More submissions by 66stingray.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel