This story is full of true passion and the heat of sex and the author does a good job of relaying that to the reader. These people were lousy at keeping people from sneaking up on them!
I don't know anything about Days of Our Lives; luckily for you it seems you do! While I don't pay for good comments, I would pay for dumb ones like yours. The check for 69 cents would be in the mail except I have no way to send it to you.....damn!
On another related subject: to the anonymous 'Hater of blackmail stories' who sent me feedback. I see no point in you giving 'every blackmail story an automatic 1' unless you are quite mad about something. I personally don't care for many different types of stories but that does not give me the right to just throw lousy votes around like stale bread to feed the birds. Get help to resolve your anger and I believe you will love life a whole lot more!
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Anonymous03/04/11
Rewrite?
Is this a rewrite or did you copy from another author? I've read a very very similar story before.
I have no idea if some other author wrote something like this...if one did I have not seen it. Would greatly appreciate a link to it so I could see how close we are. My little tale grew out of the destruction of the family of one of my buddies. He caught his mom in this sort of position and chose to tell his dad. They divorced each other and seem to both hate their son. That sucked from my perspective so I wrote this to see what would have happened if he had chosen a different path of action.
The man writes a great stroke story. Why in the hell are you looking for literary perfection here???
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Anonymous10/12/11
Nice
I've read all dd's stories. You just can't beat great writing! Very nice story. The anonymous prick does the "oh, you don't know jack routine" in every story. Honestly, it's rather pathetic. Probably some old fuck, but who cares!
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Anonymous11/19/11
Loose or Lose
When I get caught up in such a great tale as this one, I could care less how the author spells it. It barely caught my attention. I was too intent on pulling my pud imagining I was the one doing his sister and his mom. Keep up the good work! As soon as I rest a bit, I'm gonna read some more of his stories!
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Anonymous05/10/12
PLEASE FINISH this stories. It is one of the best that I have every reading
A lot of authors talk about a younger sister - and give her DD breasts. To me it would be more "erotic", and more realistic, for younger sisters to be B or even A. What do others think.
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Anonymous09/04/12
I see a lot of girls with bigger boobs now a days and there young my ex gf sister was 13 with dd's
It was good
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Anonymous10/27/12
fap fap fap almost there and anonymous had to ruin it with a correction
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Anonymous10/29/12
great story
it made me wish i was fucking my mom and sister
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Anonymous11/28/12
Brings back memories
I caught my mom having sex with my dad's business partner when I was almost out of HS and went beserk on her as I had dragged her nude by her hair into the car and took her to our at-that-hour still deserted home. I was absolutely sick with rage but I do remember screaming at her, "You want to suck cock you fucking whore, well then suck mine you cock-sucking, mother-fucking whore!" Just a crazed situation!
But she did! She sucked me off and did everything else I forced her to do to me sexually that night and for the next several days, and to her credit she was able to calm me down, though no doubt she was terrified! (I can't describe how truly heartfelt sick I feel about it now.) But at that time, I ruminated about what to do next when through a set of almost immediate fortuitous circumstances, my dad's business partner was out of the picture on a permanent basis.
Oh yeah..., I remember the insane rage I felt that night, how truly close I came to committing an act that would have ruined and devastated our whole families future. But mom knew how to handle me and what happened to the fucking asshole occurred only a few days later..., and all of the sudden I realized I had a new sex partner that was a submissive (I had only heard of subs and never experienced!) But here was a person whom I loved, (I love my mom!), and automatically mom had her new Dom... which was all she's truly, really wanted! And it turned out to be her son! She LOVED how I forced her sexually. I just don't like to think of how all of this came about...
The resulting Buy-out policy meant my dad was now sole owner and he immediately asked me to be his new partner to which I accepted and told mom, "I guess you can keeping fucking his partner!" And she did..., and does...
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Anonymous01/04/13
just an observation
@JohnnyMax I agree with you saying that a younger sister should be a smaller size like a B or an A but if you check the beginiong again you will note in this paticular story his sister is older than him.
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Anonymous07/13/13
Wow!!!
Just another great story from one who tells this kind the best. Thanks Dezurtdawg!!!
Glad the boy in this story has an average sized pecker. Kind of bums a man out those stories where the guy is over and has a little stubby seven incher.Everyone called my granddad the white mule his whole life can't match him but never shamed the family.
very hot cant wait for more on this story mom and sis that is way hot keep up the good writing
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Anonymous11/03/14
Your people sure talk a lot during sex.
In all your sex fantasies the partners seem to both carry on this over the top porno style narration of what they're doing and thinking. Even when her mouth is supposed to be full of all that massive man meat, she still carries on a running commentary of what she's actually doing? I'm guessing video porn scenes form the vast majority of your reference material. Problem with that is they're so damn fake.
Everybody in your story ends up spewing porn dialog by the end even if you start out with a decent creative story idea like this one. There's nothing wrong with borrowing inspiration from video smut if you have to, just don't use their style of phony sex-banter.
"Ron......oh shit.......fuck me Ron.........FUCK me! Oh god.......Ron...........don't stop..........I'm cumming.........so.......hard! Oh shit.......fuck.......oh.......shit.......oh...... ..my.........god yesssssohshitfuckdamnshitfuckmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. Cum with me, cum in my pussy Ron, fuck me, oh shit!"
A little of that goes a long way. Unless you were trying to make your readers chuckle each time.
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Anonymous01/01/15
For All The "Critics"......
The purpose of these "fiction" stories is to entertain people and it's obvious that it does entertain the vast majority of people who read these stories.
Again, it's FICTION..........And it's FREE..... It's not real life. Admittedly there are some people who get to live a life like this but for the vast majority of us, it's something for us to just dream about, to wish it had happened to us.
If you don't like this kind of story, there are hundreds of thousands of stories on this site so just move on and find some you do like but you haven't "earned" the right to criticize anyone on his or her writing until you have personally put the time and effort into writing your own stories that are better than the author you're criticizing.
Great story and writing but you need to continue it...some possible lines to follow are getting mom/sis pregnant; cuckolding dad; getting April to involve her girlfriends and introduce them to a real cock...
English
Loved it.
AWESOME
Loved it cant wait for the next part !!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the great work!!!!!!
FANTASTIC !!!!!!!!!!!
Another great story by the dawg! Waiting for the next installment.
Great story, more please.
So much more than just fucking and sucking!
This story is full of true passion and the heat of sex and the author does a good job of relaying that to the reader. These people were lousy at keeping people from sneaking up on them!
Cant wait
Cant wait for another chapter...
Hot Story!!!!!!!
Down and dirty!!!!!! Thanks for the great read.
Outrageously good
Loved it.
The author pulled it off for this almost a spoof of a story.
9 inch cock cumming 6 times to his mother's 14 times. That's outrageous but still fun to read.
Not too many authors could have made the story so erotic and not silly.
Thanks for the good read.
What the hell?
The conversation made Days of our Lives look deep and the whole thing might as well have been written by a 9-year-old. It's astonishingly generic.
Are you paying the other people to give you nice comments?
Dear 'Anonymous'
I don't know anything about Days of Our Lives; luckily for you it seems you do! While I don't pay for good comments, I would pay for dumb ones like yours. The check for 69 cents would be in the mail except I have no way to send it to you.....damn!
On another related subject: to the anonymous 'Hater of blackmail stories' who sent me feedback. I see no point in you giving 'every blackmail story an automatic 1' unless you are quite mad about something. I personally don't care for many different types of stories but that does not give me the right to just throw lousy votes around like stale bread to feed the birds. Get help to resolve your anger and I believe you will love life a whole lot more!
Rewrite?
Is this a rewrite or did you copy from another author? I've read a very very similar story before.
To Anonymous, Rewrite?
I have no idea if some other author wrote something like this...if one did I have not seen it. Would greatly appreciate a link to it so I could see how close we are. My little tale grew out of the destruction of the family of one of my buddies. He caught his mom in this sort of position and chose to tell his dad. They divorced each other and seem to both hate their son. That sucked from my perspective so I wrote this to see what would have happened if he had chosen a different path of action.
Thanks for helping me clarify this for you.
Dezurtdawg
Next Story
Coming Up or are you going to leave us at a CrossRoad.
When's the Sequel cumming, lol ?
Liked it.
Once again - another superb story - Thank You.
next tale
being left at the crossroads and then trying to image what comes next is good but you need to have next chapter it is one fine story
You lose you virginity not loose it.
Not sure why so many authors on here seem to confuse the words loose and lose. You can't loose something it's an adjective
whats next
when is the next installment on the story
please give us the next installment. any impregnation going on around the next installment?
Some of these folks are just too picky!!!
The man writes a great stroke story. Why in the hell are you looking for literary perfection here???
Nice
I've read all dd's stories. You just can't beat great writing! Very nice story. The anonymous prick does the "oh, you don't know jack routine" in every story. Honestly, it's rather pathetic. Probably some old fuck, but who cares!
Loose or Lose
When I get caught up in such a great tale as this one, I could care less how the author spells it. It barely caught my attention. I was too intent on pulling my pud imagining I was the one doing his sister and his mom. Keep up the good work! As soon as I rest a bit, I'm gonna read some more of his stories!
PLEASE FINISH this stories. It is one of the best that I have every reading
Something I've noticed
A lot of authors talk about a younger sister - and give her DD breasts. To me it would be more "erotic", and more realistic, for younger sisters to be B or even A. What do others think.
I see a lot of girls with bigger boobs now a days and there young my ex gf sister was 13 with dd's
It was good
fap fap fap almost there and anonymous had to ruin it with a correction
great story
it made me wish i was fucking my mom and sister
Brings back memories
I caught my mom having sex with my dad's business partner when I was almost out of HS and went beserk on her as I had dragged her nude by her hair into the car and took her to our at-that-hour still deserted home. I was absolutely sick with rage but I do remember screaming at her, "You want to suck cock you fucking whore, well then suck mine you cock-sucking, mother-fucking whore!" Just a crazed situation!
But she did! She sucked me off and did everything else I forced her to do to me sexually that night and for the next several days, and to her credit she was able to calm me down, though no doubt she was terrified! (I can't describe how truly heartfelt sick I feel about it now.) But at that time, I ruminated about what to do next when through a set of almost immediate fortuitous circumstances, my dad's business partner was out of the picture on a permanent basis.
Oh yeah..., I remember the insane rage I felt that night, how truly close I came to committing an act that would have ruined and devastated our whole families future. But mom knew how to handle me and what happened to the fucking asshole occurred only a few days later..., and all of the sudden I realized I had a new sex partner that was a submissive (I had only heard of subs and never experienced!) But here was a person whom I loved, (I love my mom!), and automatically mom had her new Dom... which was all she's truly, really wanted! And it turned out to be her son! She LOVED how I forced her sexually. I just don't like to think of how all of this came about...
The resulting Buy-out policy meant my dad was now sole owner and he immediately asked me to be his new partner to which I accepted and told mom, "I guess you can keeping fucking his partner!" And she did..., and does...
just an observation
@JohnnyMax I agree with you saying that a younger sister should be a smaller size like a B or an A but if you check the beginiong again you will note in this paticular story his sister is older than him.
Wow!!!
Just another great story from one who tells this kind the best. Thanks Dezurtdawg!!!
I need this guy. Maybe I could have a couple orgasms. Knowing me probably not multi orgasms but maybe one or two. Such a good story.
nice hot sex romp
good story-hot sex thanks
Another GOOD JOB
Glad the boy in this story has an average sized pecker. Kind of bums a man out those stories where the guy is over and has a little stubby seven incher.Everyone called my granddad the white mule his whole life can't match him but never shamed the family.
hot
very hot cant wait for more on this story mom and sis that is way hot keep up the good writing
Your people sure talk a lot during sex.
In all your sex fantasies the partners seem to both carry on this over the top porno style narration of what they're doing and thinking. Even when her mouth is supposed to be full of all that massive man meat, she still carries on a running commentary of what she's actually doing? I'm guessing video porn scenes form the vast majority of your reference material. Problem with that is they're so damn fake.
Everybody in your story ends up spewing porn dialog by the end even if you start out with a decent creative story idea like this one. There's nothing wrong with borrowing inspiration from video smut if you have to, just don't use their style of phony sex-banter.
"Ron......oh shit.......fuck me Ron.........FUCK me! Oh god.......Ron...........don't stop..........I'm cumming.........so.......hard! Oh shit.......fuck.......oh.......shit.......oh...... ..my.........god yesssssohshitfuckdamnshitfuckmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. Cum with me, cum in my pussy Ron, fuck me, oh shit!"
A little of that goes a long way. Unless you were trying to make your readers chuckle each time.
For All The "Critics"......
The purpose of these "fiction" stories is to entertain people and it's obvious that it does entertain the vast majority of people who read these stories.
Again, it's FICTION..........And it's FREE..... It's not real life. Admittedly there are some people who get to live a life like this but for the vast majority of us, it's something for us to just dream about, to wish it had happened to us.
If you don't like this kind of story, there are hundreds of thousands of stories on this site so just move on and find some you do like but you haven't "earned" the right to criticize anyone on his or her writing until you have personally put the time and effort into writing your own stories that are better than the author you're criticizing.
Great Story!!
Just needed a little anal.😠
Sequel needed!
Great story and writing but you need to continue it...some possible lines to follow are getting mom/sis pregnant; cuckolding dad; getting April to involve her girlfriends and introduce them to a real cock...
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