All Comments on 'Our Unexpected First Swap'

Speak for yourself, dude. A lot of us are turned right off by fake tits.

Well 12 and then an 8 up the ass not sure but good story for as it goes made me horny have a dull sex life so reading this sure it goes on not for me well put down nice story.

Budddie U/K

I enjoyed it immensely. I thought the writing was pretty good as well. I think my wife and I would enjoy meeting you two.

I loved the image of that great big fat cock slicing in and out of those tiny tight pussies.

Great story, well written, a great reflection of reality. I read it, and saw it, like I was watching a movie. You are well talented.

took me back to our first swinging experience... minus the monster cock thing.... and the huge fake tits...well written... exciting read... I wish you had given more details about Patty's blow job on John on the balcony at the end

And I also like 'em small, firm, floppy, flat or almost non-existent. All kinds of tits are mammary-licious!

I also liked this story (and working with an editor could only improve the result).

Please keep writing!

Just a neat, sexy story! What a hot wife!

... I was expecting him to eat the creampie. or, before that, for the two wives to eat each other clean. Otherwise, very hot.

Man, I'd like to share an adventure with my wife like the one that you describe here.

It's was one of THE HOTTEST adventures I've read. Thankful SO MUCH! The fake tits thing didn't distract at all from the heat of this especially well written story. Fucking loved it .. THANK YOU!!! Tim

Constant misuse of she and I, wife and I, etc. Annoying!

And that's being generous. 6" pumps? 8" cock? 12" cock? perfect fake tits? "Darlene was memorized by the site." Did you mean, Darlene was mesmerized by the sight.? Was this intended as satire? I gave up after 2 pages. Nothing erotic here.

John and Darlene originally came across as mercenary vultures, just looking for some fresh meat to devour. And the whole cliche’d saga of John’s big ‘12 incher’ pretty much left me wishing I had skipped this story completely. I couldn’t give this one more than one star.

Now that was a totally unforgettable vacation. Something to look back on for many years. I want to someday watch my wife with another man.

Love hearing about a first time experience with two couples, hot sexy wives. First time swaps always carry a level of uncertainty but hunger for great exciting sex with a new partner. Your story exhibiting care and concern for each other while simultaneously totally enjoying each other being fucked by a new partner was well scripted. This is something every sexy wife needs to experience with her hot trusting hubby. It's nice to read an ending where each go home with their respective partners. My hat off to all the hot pussies who love good hard cock.

Your story had me hard the entire time! Can't wait to read more of your work.

12 inch cock and 8 inches on the other guy, get real the over statement of giant cocks ruined it…

It was fantastic!!!

Yes, it's fantasy, but too much "ass to X" with no effort at hygiene!

One of the characteristics of a great story is the development of the characters. This is a great story! Well defined personalities. The story line continues to make the reader wonder about what is coming next. It sucks us in. Strong communication between loving partners is key to exploring outside partners. Your story expressed that. Your story also offers continuing affirmation of love toward each other's own partner. Your story is one of the best!

One of the best reads I have ever had

hmmm, enjoyed this swap story very much,,not too short, not too long,,,,when the narrator(mark) made the statement, ""we never swapped with them again"" i felt the story could have ended right there,,it was such a letdown after such a high point.

It’s taken me 2 days to read this storie. It is one of the steamiest ones I have read on here and have masturbated 3 times to this. I love the idea of swapping partners and having a some wild fun. I just wish my hubby was a little more open minded in our marriage and be more adventurous. Not that I haven’t tried to encourage him. I guess this will only ever be a fantasy for me and my trusty toys.

This is so damn close to being the best story, particularly the best swinging story, on Literotica. The focus on the size of John’s cock size, the continual reminder of its length, and the resulting concerns about injury (particularly to Patty) became somewhat off-putting after a while. The cocks going into asses and then immediately into pussies was a turn-off. Yes, it’s fantasy, but ewwww! The wrong pronouns, as mentioned by others, took it down a bit, too. … But the sex! The characters were well-developed, even to the point of wondering about John and Darlene’s true motives. Were they sinister? No, but that element was present. High marks for the story but all the problems did interrup the enjoyment. … Four stars. So close to five.