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by estragon03/04/11

A Few Quibbles of My Own

Actually only one. Changed spelling from "Molly" to "Mollie" in mid-story. So I say to myself, "Make up your mind, self."

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by EMiamiRiverRat03/07/12

Where in the mind of a man

can be a story like this? Quite an accomplishment, I would say; but you are a more capable writer than the ratings indicate. You have broken the mold, now the envelope beckons. Push it, for us.

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