All Comments on 'Football Practice'

Seriously! I gave you a five for a great intro but this was really only about half a story. It needs a lot more student/teacher interaction and some sort of conclusion to even be a chapter. I see there is a chapter 2 also in this series but cfnm must not be a tag. What a let down!!!

this could be a twist on an old theme. TK U MLJ LV NV

please write more