Seriously! I gave you a five for a great intro but this was really only about half a story. It needs a lot more student/teacher interaction and some sort of conclusion to even be a chapter. I see there is a chapter 2 also in this series but cfnm must not be a tag. What a let down!!!
Two and a half
Seriously! I gave you a five for a great intro but this was really only about half a story. It needs a lot more student/teacher interaction and some sort of conclusion to even be a chapter. I see there is a chapter 2 also in this series but cfnm must not be a tag. What a let down!!!
A HEN IN THE FOX DEN
this could be a twist on an old theme. TK U MLJ LV NV
great story
please write more
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