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Jonah and the Fairy Ch. 02

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by macster_man197603/06/11

interesting

an excellent story,well thought out and laid out,even though you said you usually don't do these storys,I think you have quite the talent for them,keep it up!!!

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by Socially_Inept03/06/11

Oh man.

You had me worried 'til near the end. I argee that the first story was a great stand alone. Why this addition, I don't know. To think Jonah won't see his daughter for a good number of years is very sad.
That said this was still a good story. I just don't think it was needed.

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by PompousBuffoon03/06/11

A fine addition.

Bravo Alan. Keep on telling your fine stories in your own way. The readers will have to sort things out for themselves.

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by shyintx03/07/11

Hurry Hurry with the next one

I love this story. I cried the whole time I read it.

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