The Grudge Fuck

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Great story, great read...Thanks JPB!!!

Well done

A fast paced smooth flowing story that was fun to read.

Thanks for the entertainment.

Very nice

Quick and to the point. You have a style of writing that flows well.

Hahaha! Classic revenge tale.

Oh my gosh

JPB - I must be getting soft in the head, because I really liked this story. Just enough revenge on a total dickhead who deserved it and a happy ending all around.

Master at the quickie ...

well done ... loved the story!

Good one!

I liked this one quite a bit,
Thanks,
MGM

This was great!

A classic JPB tale

A lot of fun

It's funny to see Phil screwing himself over and over. The quote about insanity being "doing something repeatedly and expecting a different result each time". Meanwhile Rob is doing almost nothing to respond to Phil. Phil just ends up the loser. Of course there is the underlying theme that Rob is a nice guy and Phil is an asshole. Rob doesn't have to go after Phil's girls, they come to him. Too funny.

Great story

One of your best. You think you can deal with the compliments?

Absolutely one of your best!

Loved it.

A classic JPB

and very well written

GR8

Another Fiver JPB. Some just never know when to quit.
Just an aside, how come when women get pregnant on Lit, it is usually twins? Why not triplets?

a really good yearn.

all things ended well and happy.

just the way things should in a good read.

5 stars woudl have given you more but... 5 the max.

great story

once again bob---ACES!

Outstanding and clearly deserves 5 stars.

JPB is all over the place from horrible 1 star stories to 5 star stories such as this one.

Oh GOD!

I'm agreeing with Dworknob. This was a fun little story that I somehow missed the first time.

But as they say: a stopped clock is right twice a day. So I won't let it get to me.

Really cute

Very entertaining -- and isn't that what these stories are about? 5 for sure.

Well Done

The title says it all. Five stars.

Enjoyable

I love the paybacks on this one. Great read.

Really good

Bob, I know that you get a lot of flack. But I enjoy reading your stories whether I like them or not. But this one was very good. Thanks for all your writing. Jim

Everyone Who's Anyone Has Had A High School Nemesis Like Phil ...

& we all wish we squashed him back pretty much like this. Just Another JPB cool & cruel noir classic.

PEOPLE WHO HOLD GRUDGES

never win or lose.....Just exist. TK U MLJ LV NV

Thanks for the offering.

Nice job...

Sherry turned out to be a pretty good bet. Thanks JPB; certainly a fiver.

****

It was a good read, but I have to say that Phil has always been a dumb SOB. His adversary relationship with Rob may have motivated him a lot and let him soar to unforeseen heights, but that certainly didn't make him happy, or a good human for that matter.

true but....

The Geo was a perfect lawn ornament for Phil.
Wouldn't want to give him anything that was worth something.

Good read, oh yeah.

Good story, I like that no idiots benefitted in this story. As usually very easy reading and good flow to the story. Thanks Bob

I'LL SHOW YOU

and I am not from Missouri. TK U MLJ LV NV

You Know

I don't agree with the commenters on this one. I thought both guys were jerkoffs and the wife turned a revenge fuck into a life. A life that if this tale were continued she would have spread her legs for someone else for one reason or another. No I didn't really care too much for this.

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