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It Was A Rainy Dark Night

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/26/12

Ummmmm

Not bad. Not sure how it fits the catagorey?!!

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by voicesintheshadows01/28/16

how?

How did you get this past the editors? Its rife with errors that frankly were quite jarring to read. That said, it has alot of potential. I was expecting someone to eventually turn into a monster or vampire or somthing. This belongs in a different category. You kept saying "you" making me think it was a point of view story but it wasnt cause you also referred to the same character with identifiers like "he and his". Your story had some good meat but the potatoes made it hard to swallow.

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