All Comments on 'My Twin Sister'

This story needs at least one more chapter, after all it's only friday night and the family will be gone for the weekend. A little more exploration is in order, I think.

Then, when you got to the sex between them there as nothing. It happened, but that's all. DETAILS, man DETAILS. Take your time. No need to rush.

I've written a few stories with various themes over the years but rarely publish. Any feedback would be valuable and yest there will be a second installment of Rebecca and Tony.

Completely miscategorized.

I agree, more detail and take your time, has the essence of a good story, look forward to seeing more

thank you , nice storie .

I liked some of this story so I copied it to word and deleted all the gay shit. Pretty good story once you do that.

a very nice story - very sweet and sensual - keep up the writing, you have real talent

That's......very very weird.......see a doctor or something, that's something that should never ever be done!

I personally have two sisters and would never do anything sexual with them. That said, it is arousing for me to read fictional stories about consensual sex between siblings, especially well written ones like this. Good show ;)

Creepy... man, but awesome. I don't have any sister but if i had i'd never do that :O but it should feels good, i mean if you fucked her and she's your sister I only see 2 options, or you and your sister have a mental issue or she's fucking hot to the point of being fucked for his own brother. xD -127

not much build up or romance but still a good place to start

Can't agree with a former commenter about being gay just for doing other things with same-sex people. Just means bi-curious, or mutual masturbation.

Nice story though. Very sexy once things start going.

Could use a better build-up for the solo part though. lol

my sister loved to watch me cum too!

Come on now if it was her 1st time He couldn't just shove it inside her so quickly....

Fekt a bit rushed. No build up just a wam bam thank you mam...

Proofread, proofread, proofread

Lost me at him tadting his own prejizz. That was gross and unnecessary.