Country Love

Good Start

This is a good start, a little too short for my liking but good. I think judgeing by this small snipet that you have a talent for writing, but just work on getting the length up. We didn't get much of a romance through in this chapter, but the back story was great. Hope too see the next chapter up soon to help fill in the blanks about your writing style and this story. Overall I'm looking forward to an update. :)

keep going

A little short but cant wait to see where this goes from here!

A little on the short side, but it is good. Like to see where this goes from here.

It is well-written and I enjoyed it, but I think that you ended it too soon. I think since it is a romance, you should have told us who was in that car which would be implying there is a guy who this romance could develop with. The way it is now, it could be a woman or anybody in the car. I think it is ok that it is short but wanted to see a hint of where a romance might come in.

very good start

This is a great start