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This story needs a few more chapters. Great start.
Great start
I love the premise and look forward to many more chapters.
Story
Nice start can you make it longer
promise
The sotry has promise. But in future stories the commonly used slang term for an orgasm/semen/etc is "cum" not the other "come" variety.
Nice.
Great story, Tx! Reminds me of my first time.
Great Read
Nicely done.
Thanks for sharing.
I GAVE YOU A 4
only because you left me with my tongue hanging out wishing for more. Really enjoyed the way you put the story together and definitely hope that you will follow up at least one more segment.
HOT !
Hi Tx . I LOVE your stories, especially On the boardwalk. Your new storie,Ely, is hot , and i like the mother-daughter thing. I simply LOVE your sence of humor - keep whriting. Maj ;o)
Well done!
The story was written beautifully. I enjoyed every word and the descriptiveness was extremely hot. Made me wish I had gone through the same experience with my friends moms.
Great
What a super read, well written and just loved the caricatures that you drew, I hope that you do a follow up and we can cary on with them, once again great read thanks for posting....
Great story
Thanks for a very enjoyable read.
Virtings: Daughter and Boyfriend.
I liked the story until Jenny showed up. From there on it was boring for me. Just too unbelievable.
The sex between Ann and Ely was great. You have a real knack for sex scenes, but this story falls apart when Jenny shows up.
Liking it
I'm not crazy about stories that start out by jumping right into the sex without some build up, but this was well done.
Some readers might complain that it's not like real life because what Mother and Daughter would act this way, but I don't want to read real life. Real life is mostly boring and Ely fell into most every guys fantasies. True life, probably not but who knows it could be possible. I'm just envious that it was him and not me LOL. Great story, thanks
That was a surprise.
Not often do you read of family education programmes like this. Good luck Ely.
To Anonymous of 3/08/11 'come' is the correct spelling and the other version is usually only employed by American slang users.
WOW
What an interesting story. WOnder why they did not fuck, More chapters!!
More please!!!!!!
this was excellent y ou need to write more
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