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Nice story
Great description of the love making, but now it is time to get to know a bit about Erin. Who is she and why is a georgeous young woman like her unattached and available? Why is she attracted to our nerdish young man, who would not appear to be knocking the young ladies off their collective feet before now?
Well
Truth is, the narrator isn't a nerd. He is just the average computer engineer. He isn't unlucky with the ladies (I vaguely suggested that the narrator has had more than one partner).
As for Erin, she is a mystery. Her intentions, emotions, actions, everything about her is ambiguous because I've made her a mystery. What fun is there in revealing a mystery? Revealing it removes the search for it.
I may or may not reveal more about her in the future, but I can't give too much of her away. The reader cannot be given everything. I only provide half the story. The reader has to fill in some of the holes so that they can become part of the story.
Wonderful
i don't have a single compliant,the characters & really for us Guys,whats in a womans mind is always a mystery & the Ladies want us to Find out on our own...it has the perfect mix of cuteness,romance/love & the needs of a Man & woman for each other..Great story ^-^
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