All Comments on 'Barnyard Fantasy Ch. 01'

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I stopped reading after only a few paragraphs - too many errors distracted from the gist of the story. You described Georgia's tits as perky, tiny (teased about them), and in the very next sentence, described them as bouncing because they were large. Try proofing reading or better yet get a qualified, educated editor to correct your mistakes. Don't get in such a hurry to have Lit print your story that you submit sloppy, ill-written material.