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The Age Machine Ch. 01

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by Anonymous03/10/11

Love it so far!!

Very well written, spelling and grammar ... and wording is excellent.

You have my stamp of approval ... and anxiously awaiting more. :)

Diana

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by Anonymous03/11/11

Disturbing . . .

Exceedingly well written . . . so much so that I don't want to read the next installment on an erotic forum. This is a great premise, and I think you will be able to deliver.

But it's not what I'm looking for here. Best of luck with your continued efforts.

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by SMTRandretti03/19/11

A note from the author

I was "commissioned" to write this story based on this premise: A man trading ages with his wife, as an act of submission.

Perhaps that factoid might affect how you judge the work.

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