All Comments on 'Talla's Temple Ch. 17'

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katgoddess1 about 13 years ago

nerve-wracking

good chapter

Kolrin about 13 years ago

Damn good

I read your story in a single round, which is quite something considering the length. You set a nice pace, and the story has lots of originality. I really like that.

Hope to see more soon.

xtorch about 13 years agoAuthor

Thanks.

Someone was asking for more drama. Fortunately, it was just around the corner. Hopefully, this hit the spot.

Anonymousabout 13 years ago

dry opinion

Exciting

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