All Comments on 'another boring rhyming poem....'

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CuddlyAlCuddlyAlabout 13 years ago
Feelin' good was easy

Unpretentious and effective.

vrosej10vrosej10about 13 years ago
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Hard to take seriously because the rhyme makes it come over flippant. Rhyming poetry has a place; it's not next to serious content. This is not a personal attack, I just thing your energies could be better directed.

vrosej10vrosej10about 13 years ago
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Check green's poem above you and reread yours; you'll get what I mean.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
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5 but I question the title, my reading of this is it is supposed to be flip, esp the toss away lines at the end.

kstarneskstarnesabout 13 years ago
hard to take

missus roses poems that r so cryptic they r not even understandable at least your poem makes sense.

buttersbuttersabout 13 years ago
agree with the flippant sound to this

that exists because of your chosen boppy kind of beat... i can imagine someone doin' their walk down the street to this rhythm.

as for the poem, well, i think it has more depth than first appears. it grows on me the more i read it.

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