whore frost

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Five and a recommend. You know how much I love a short poem and that word play seems familiar...:)

Whore's riposte

after last knight's hot turds
a bold cunt's settled in -

there's dogshit underfoot this morning

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Short and to the point... I like it!

*****

Five.

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Oh yes been there! perfectly described well done

oh yes

Ice ee the udder anon has beet me again

Well done! Says a lot in very few words!

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who hasn't experienced on one of those mornings? Succinct little poem. Deadly accurate. The sentiment and style reminds me of Adrian Henri.

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to be honest, I don't like this much, I get two readings on this, one too pat, the other just slips away,
well a 5

seems like

the shorter your poems are the better they are. I liked this one. good work bijou