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by vrosej1003/10/11

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Creepy/beautiful. I love that.

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by GuiltyPleasure03/10/11

perfect.....

.....description of fog amid trees.

Tess

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by Maria239403/11/11

ooohhh

I liked this one. It is eerie without being frightening. Good work.

~ maria

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by twelveoone03/11/11

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well done 5, see sandburg, somewhere on the web is a 6 page explanation of sandburg's "fog", if you find it may be of interest.

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