All Comments on 'Hochwasser'

by Kaishaku

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vrosej10vrosej10about 13 years ago
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Wow, you know how to write! I am continually impressed with your stuff. Five and a recommend...you are also the only other person here who writes tanka...

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 13 years ago
Sexy....

...and suggestive, sounds good too when read aloud.

Tess

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
and among other things

he is an expert in haiku. How many alts doth thou have? Maybe 4 or 5 or more? and they are all excellent poets/ storytellers in their own right.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
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a 5 without much to say, I do like negotiable, negligent, glimpse, fiscal fervor, etc. "tumescent flesh" ahh, but as weak point, not bad.

AngelineAngelineabout 13 years ago
Excellent writing

and an excellent example of no wasted words: you made every one work. Always a pleasure to read your poems!

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