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Wow, you know how to write! I am continually impressed with your stuff. Five and a recommend...you are also the only other person here who writes tanka...
Sexy....
...and suggestive, sounds good too when read aloud.
Tess
and among other things
he is an expert in haiku. How many alts doth thou have? Maybe 4 or 5 or more? and they are all excellent poets/ storytellers in their own right.
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a 5 without much to say, I do like negotiable, negligent, glimpse, fiscal fervor, etc. "tumescent flesh" ahh, but as weak point, not bad.
Excellent writing
and an excellent example of no wasted words: you made every one work. Always a pleasure to read your poems!
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