All Comments on 'Isobelle Inches Forward'

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LakesLakesabout 13 years ago
Outstanding piece of work!

Wonderfully written!

Mr. E manMr. E manabout 13 years ago
wonderful

fantastic story

the_apocalypsethe_apocalypseabout 13 years ago
great

thoroughly enjoyed it

luvjuice43luvjuice43about 12 years ago
Excellent

A wonderfully written story but I cannot get the image of your (hopefully) nude body while holding your (hopefully) Glock pistol. I wonder if you have felt it buck against you as your finger moved the trigger causing it to respond with sound and force as it belched its load through its hard shaft.

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