All Comments on 'Office Fun Illustrated'

She would be a good fuck? Nice tits? Would love to look up her skirt in my office.

I thought the story was great when I first read it ... and now you have made it even better with some lovely photos ... thank you making something better that I thought was already fantastic.

....Great photos, thanks..Juliet has obviously elevated her sexuality so please write some stories about her new job as the beach bar's erotic masseuse at Hilton's nudist resort in Cannes..she is popular and averages 18 half hour "sessions" per day and she is live 24/7 onthe internet.. she loves the African swingers week especially the huge basketball players .....what fun..Looking forward to your "massage" stories..thanks

The story was great on it's own and only got better with the pics. As good as the first pic is in the story, it was that much better when I made it the background on my computer!! (After everyone else left the office, of course. And sadly has gone away as I prepare for another exciting day in the trenches.) Also, LOVE the new bio pic!!!

Lovely pics to with the story. Loved landing strip leading home !

Also like new pic in profile.

Man oh Man! That is one fucking tasty, delicious crotch shot of those Black Panties. Makes me hungry! I want to eat right through those panties.

All those photos sure made the store come alive even MORE than your writing already does, Jules.

I love this "Illustrated" version of stories.

Love to lick that panties....

Just the right amount of control for my tastes.

completely arousing for both of us! ; )~

Yum Yum, love licking wet pussies and wet panties, Would love to

see more of her body

Thanks for sharing that - very exciting.

I loved Jules' knicker pics and would love to see more of her. It's a slight shame you haven't posted a pic of the tech's erection.

and the pics. Best pics on Lit. More please!

Excellent story!

Great visual of the fun than may occur - but darn - who walked off with 'em?

So nice. Just right. You got my attention.

👍👍!

Bravissima! I gave you a 5.0 (🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟) for the story, and a 5.25 (❤💚❤💚❤+) for the pics!

(1) I gave you a 5.0 (100%) for the text.

(2) I found it next to impossible to decide which of the 3 pics is the best. In the end I chose the one in black lace panties.

The winner got a 5.5 (= 110%)!

The other two got a 5.25 each (= 105% each).

Thank you for this illustrated story.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐+ [5+ (5.5 = 110%, "above expectations")

★★★★★+ (5+)

Re the first pic:

Her little sheer panties do nothing to hide her pussy, every detail clearly visible.

👍👍!

I am copy pasting an earlier comment:

"Provoked - over 9 years ago

Excellent control

Just the right amount of control for my tastes"

The text is in sync with the 3 pics.

The illustrations get a 5.5 of 5 = 110% (★★★★★+).

The text gets 5.25 of 5 = 105% (★★★★★+).

All in all mark 5.375 = 107.5% (★★★★★+)!

An A+ story!

A+ illustrations!

The picture on Bio page also gets an A+!

The story gets ★★★★★ (5)

Pic on Bio page: ★★★★★ (5.0)

Pic of black lace panties: ★★★★★ (5.0)

❤💚❤💚❤

- Love this story, gave it a 5.0 = 100%!

- the pictue on the biography page and the picture on top of page 1 (black lace panties) are very very erotic, and (yes!) romantic, and (yes!) even poetic. They are priceless! End of story.

So sexy! Loved the build up, the rising tension! Such a great tease! Fantastic pictures!

Text, 5.0 = 💯% (☆☆☆☆☆)

Pics,* 5.0 = 💯% (☆☆☆☆☆)

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* including the picture on biography page.

5.0 = 💯% (❤💛💚💙💜) 👍👍!

🙂

Hot like a nuclear explosion , the story was like bomb bay doors opening on the sensory perception of my mind , all full of white hot heat and intensity , but then the pictures filled my visual cortex and made it explode , I was blown away , gashes to gashes and lust to lust ! Scan the horizon I’m sure you’ll see a mushroom cloud ! I’m gonna go now , after that I’m ready for a fallout ! 5 megaton stars to you !!!!!

Hot story but poor spelling and punctuation a distraction. Keep it up but get an editor!