All Comments on 'Mastering Submission Ch. 03'

...other than 'Excellent'? A wonderful and literate piece as always. Thank you so much for sharing this great talent with us - 5 *s. I await part 4 avidly. Thank you again.

The efforts at verbal humiliation come across as joking, the whole thing reads like a parody of a D/s relationship. This more than anything else made me quit part way through the chapter.

Given that she’s had more than 5 minutes to think about his initial proposition at the cafe then she would have done some research, she’s in academia research is a knee jerk reaction, it’s ingrained. So she would have an idea of what to expect, sure she might not like or believe it if it’s totally unfamiliar but she wouldn’t be ignorant on the topic. As there are $30k worth of reasons to contemplate submitting you can bet your arse that she’d have a list of limits to negotiate.