For a first effort, not bad. I was left with the feeling of wanting more, which is a good sign. On the down side, not enough to enter a rating. Will look for more...
A nice start to the story, what about the 2nd, 3rd, and 4th parts..............
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A bit of a tease
For a first effort, not bad. I was left with the feeling of wanting more, which is a good sign. On the down side, not enough to enter a rating. Will look for more...
The Boss - part 2
A nice start to the story, what about the 2nd, 3rd, and 4th parts..............
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