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by Anonymous

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by vrosej1003/13/11

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A little long for my tastes but enjoyable.

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by twelveoone03/13/11

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you got a five. Agree with Vr. Some lite and enjoyable. Some is just me amusing myself
my cock is hard
a piece of lumber,
what knotty pine? See I told you, me amusing myself. Would be much better chopping out the cliches. People don't like me much, when I have to resort to amusing myself. See Rant #3/ she got a 5, this time.

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by Lady Clarissa04/05/11

Delightful as ever....

.....witty and quirky and you actually rhyme! (too few poets do).
Lovely, thank you!

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